I agree?

Well, this is the correction of the writing that we writed on class :)

People have made a diferents inventios in the world. Them, like anothers, has dammanged or helped the enviroment. Since the first machines appeared (as the trains, the mechanic ships... )
For me, The world is like a presore cooker. When we hurt it, it increases its presion, until it blows up. We don't respect the enviroment, because we use cars, phones, burn the toxic materials, the chmicals... When a country which consumes more than it produces asks more to others countries. When we go to the supermarket, we use a plastic bagsanoly five minutes ans afther get rid of them.
It is too easy to buy chocolate, its price is not spensive, but the plastic that saved is can husrt a lot of enviroment. For this reason, we need to loock afther the world, because it is too easy to leave, because is so confortable this system, but is the best?
In my opinion, the world is wrong. We can't change the goverments or the system, although we want it. In conclution, I do not agree with this sentence... We haven't almost learnt to respect our world.

Informal Letter:

Peni 1 a

Ampuria Brava

Cataluña

7/jun/11

Dear Mochammed!

Thanks you so much for your last letter. Are you fine? I hope so. You where talking to me about your holidays in Japan, you said that it is so beautiful and exotic. My holidays will be in Venezuela, on the east coast, in Maracaibo.

I can recommend you this place because it is an awesome zone; the people who live in this place are very extroverted and funny. Also, the atmosphere is very nice: a lot of music, different food types and the clime are very good, but a little bit hot!

One of the places of Maracaibo is the Choroni beach. It is a very nice option to go on holidays. The sandy of this beach is extremely white and the water is very clean and blue. The zone is also so beautiful because it is in the middle of the jungle, you can eat the natural coconuts of the beach or listen to the voice of the tropical birds.

If you come here, you will need special sunny clothes and… well… insect repellent….

In Venezuela, the places that you can visits are the commercial centres, the Maracaibo lagoon and the centre of Maracaibo “Las pulgas”

I hope that you come here because it is very funny and beautiful place!

See you! XXX

Africa Santeliz